Nostos: Homecoming (one-line poem, modified sonnet)

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I wrote this poem as I became annoyed by the flat roles of female characters in many epic films I watched, where female actors have few lines and a good portion of them are just ridiculous screams. I was also inspired by the idea of those who miss out on the epic adventure, particularly by Penelope, Odysseus’ wife left behind to fend off suitors.

 

Since I’ve just one line in the next two hours

I’ll say it soft from my offstage bowers:

 

I’ll say it in the time it takes

For a scream to summon a rugged male

While you measure my waist in camera shakes

And repeatedly cue my face to pale

Since: you can’t expect the fade-to-black

When your ship exhales in calmer air

You must push my darling suitors back

While I dress your wounds with gushing care

With a flourish of flashback I will see

How you swept the landscape, saved the race

But when I show my unraveled tapestry

You plummet into that other place

Where the sun is pink and the moon is black

And a score of strings can staunch a bleed

So I pack a bag and slip out the back

To my own feature film, with a mare for a steed.

 

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