My Reflection on my presentation

It’s a very awful presentation. Nervous, mistakes, stops- even hardly expressed what I wanted to say. It’s due to insufficient preparation and simulation. I should have prepare more, write a draft for presentation and memorize it, then consider how to make it looks natural for speaking.

According to the reflection of classmates, I am a little confused because I thought the last part of my draft- portrait of stars in night on Mount Sinai is not good for a presentation, for it can’t be oral enough.

However, I think my volume is still good. Also, I think I did good job to make my narrative essay sounds more like a stories for telling. I tried to make eye contact with everyone, and I used some gestures. I will try to keep these for my next presentation.